Has a beautiful face without a
name
And a beautiful smile to hide the
pain
This Girl In the Dark
Has cuts up her arm
Loves nothing more then self
harm
This Girl in the dark
Doesn’t know how much longer she
can keep trying
Everyday she’s slowly dying
This Girl in the Dark
Sits all alone
Wants a place to truly call
home
This Girl in the dark
Wants nothing more then to be
free
I know this because this Girl is
me
This is not just a poem by Julie
bond, but the inner voice of every feminine soul. In my dictionary, a girl is a human species whose body is not
as soft as Ranunculus,
but as sensitive as Dormilones.
Her heart is not as rigid as Carbyene,
but as strong as Diamond.
Her mind is not as open as a Book, but it is as clear as a Crystal.
God created humans to live by love. What
are all the things to be loved? Nature,nation,fashion,science,spirit
and all the living creatures. We see that, mostly we call all rivers,mountains,oceans,nations,bacteria,algae
in names of femininity. All the lovables are perceived as feminine, but not all
the females are loved and
respected. 'Change is
unchangeable' is accepted by all. But
some believe that women are exceptional to change. This thought paves way to all the problems forced to be faced by women. These women, despite
their hardship, struggle not to change others view
about them, but to prove their
identity. Women are not
flightless cassowaries but their wings are pinned.
A good start with moving verses. Sturdy words sparkling in a light way clearly accents our theme. The tone of a flightless bird yeaning to fly is verbalized in your utterance. Good start to fly!!!
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ReplyDeleteA fantastic start With smoothing verses...which makes me to so strong abt feminism... HATES OF...
ReplyDeleteexactly..Despite the hardwork amd struggle.. we are the ones who are made to put up with violence , stereotypes and a constanty unquestioned unacceptance in the name of compassion.
ReplyDeleteHope our words unpin our wings.
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ReplyDeleteA wondeful start... Unwavering words clearly explains what the feminine soul is.These lines not only contains unremitting words but also contains semantics.Good start to glide !!!!
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ReplyDeleteGreat start..keep go..all the best😃
ReplyDeleteThanks.. keep supporting us 😊
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ReplyDeleteWowwwww 😍😍 well written.. Go ahead 💕
ReplyDeleteThe illuminated words commenced to swipe away the women in dark...Nice...
ReplyDeleteSpread your wings and reach Greater heights..😃😆
The comparison to sensitivity as Dormilore,heart strong as diamond,mind as crystal are ok.
ReplyDeleteBut why to get struck up with negative thoughts lets try positivity.Let change in women be accepted let us bring this feminist view even stronger. Let us unpin the wings to fly with flying colours.
Thank you for your true comments. I need your enduring support.
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